Dreams of you....

by Tabitha L Peters   Sep 30, 2007


I had such a wonderful dream,
Of us standing by a stream-
Under the warmth of the Summer sun,
We were having so much fun...

Just us 2 being alone together,
Promising that it would last 4-ever-
We held each other till the sun went down,
But never once did we wear a frown...

As I awoke on this beautiful day,
I realized everything would be ok-
As you lay there sleeping beside me,
I then knew our love was meant to be...

Love You Sweetheart 4-ever!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Great and wonderfully expressed

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    I think this was actually more of a love poem, I didnt find it very amusing. Although it was excellently written i thought you focused too much on the rhyming couplets, it took away some of the nice vocabulary that you used. Well done though. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    Very Beautiful And Sweet.
    LOVE IT!!

    Keep up the beautiful writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    The idea or the sound on your expressions seems to be quite charming. tt's always my pleasure to read line by line carefully on all what you try to narrate. itt might take minutes to get its real emotion,. your expressions and its wave is a charismatic one. 'GOOD' Feel better and write more, inform me of any new, and I will take interest deeply without any hesitations dear.

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