by Rey Sep 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Another night passes and I lay awake contemplating whether my love is real or but another fake. I toss and turn remembering past relationships that caused my utter heartbreak. I roll to my left, I roll to my right, these confusing and insecure thoughts are sure hard to fight. |
by Mary
Great poem. I really liked it. You used a lot of complicated words lol. But thats the good part because most people use the same words that i see in every poem. Keep up the good work. and plz comment some of my poems if u have time: they were meant to be part 1&2 |
Great poem 5/5 you did an excellent job |