Hidden desire

by Kenneth   Sep 30, 2007


You do all these things that make no sense
Your actions against words
Saying I am so stubborn and dense
When youre the one in thirds

Thinking about three guys all the time
The next one
The lost one
And the close one

You want the next to be like the one thats close
your pain is from the ones you chose
The next one is doomed to be the lost one
Because they were all meant to be the close one
But the close one is known secretly
Yet you fear and deny him readily

You use each just to cover the other
New mistake to cover yet another
Its an endless cycle of pain
I jumped out watching and waning
Now nothing else left to do
No fight left to pursue

this poem is not really done need to work on it but i got the basic idea down im open to suggestion

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Wonder who this is about.....??

  • 17 years ago

    by mely

    I love it so far

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Yeah I agree with Mary, this poem is atcually pretty complicated to understand....I think it would do with some work, just to make it a bit clearer...... but I understand the message, and probably everyone else who reads this will to, because it is easy to tell what you're on about...but not so easy to follow....
    and this poem is atcually pretty true for me, makes me feel a bit like trash...but i guess that's what i should feel to some degree..

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary

    Hey
    good poem. Its kinda complicated to understand but if u reread it u get it lol. Well keep up the good work and if u have time plz comment some of my poems: they were meant to be part 1 &2

    ~mary~

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