by Teria Sep 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Creating Friction. |
Clever title, great poem |
by ECILA ice
This is a beautiful and peaceful piece.. actually i can't really get the real idea in here.. are there second thoughts in the relationship (is that what are you trying to portray in here?) but this one is really sweet.. |
by Melpomene
This was beautiful, Honestly such a gorgeous piece you have written here. The title caught my interest was unique and different. Your word choice sweet holding such amazing emotions which you portrayed deeply into this poem. From start to finish it kept me interested and I didn't get bored at all. For one of your first non ryhme poem this was outstanding. Well done. Keep on writing I suggest you write more pieces like this as you did a fantastc job. 5/5 ~Mel |
Awe. . . this was amazing. the words |