I really liked this poem it was very well done and I enjoyed the twist. I see alot of greatness in your work but I think you need to expand your work to more subjects and learn to write about a lot more then love. I would say this to any writer and I do the same myself if you ever looked at my profile you would find I have a wide variety of work Plot121

THIS IS CUTE. THAT'S HOW I FEEL TOWARDS U.