I can relate 2 that, ur relli good at puttin it into words. the pain. its so hard. and yea. great job

If it comes from the heart that is the best you can do. You did a great job

Hey, i thought i would look at a poem of yours sinse you are in my club :D, i like this poem but i think you could have chose better words for some of your phrases. Like on the first line, could be You ARE always in my thoughts, my soul' you see what i mean using stronger vocab, but nice poem. I like the way that you layed the whole thing out and the message though. Nice job xxx alex xxx