I really like this one but it i think it should be in the fantasy section not nature. but good job any way

It was ok. Its form poetry which is always tough to do which is why i stay away from it, its too constricting. But you used the form well so I gave you a 5/5. Keep up the good work.

I think that this was cute and sweet, i dont think that it was the best acrostic i have read, but for a 7 lined acrostic is was good.
Love Tara-Kay
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You used repetition in the poem. I do not like repetition because your saying the same thing over and over again.

"Evolving beauties"
"love, beauty, desires"
"natural beauties"

Now I don't mind that you used it three times. But it is only a 7 line poem. You could of done much better than this. Perhaps saying alternative words such as:

Aesthetic.
Gorgeous.
or
Stunning.

[You would of gotten major points for Aesthetic].

It's not excellent. Sorry, it's a good poem. I do not doubt that.

[Vote 4]

_Sam

Ahh a great write, I found it deep, and leaving me thinking if mermaids really exist. aww, i quess they are a bit of your inspiration, so cute. Great work on this one!
5/5 keep it up!

Actually i don't know if it was the depthness or the imaginations or description that confuses me.. i love the imagination but it seems so blur to me. i love acrostic too and i guess you manage it very well.. but i really like the other one "mermaid" though i know this is also a unique piece.

Ending line is so powerful and it adds special tone to the poem.
Repetition of words in the poems usually leaves awful expression, you used word beauty in this short poem tree times but I still like it, because it don't actually destroy the flow and I personally like what you did whit that. Well done, good job, very creative and imagery is excellent trough whole piece.

I love acrostics and this one really touched me and I love how it is worded. Simple yet effective lexis make this one a good cohesive and quality acrostic. You got 5/5 from me :)

Tc
Fsams

Nicely panned poem i loved the way you have wrote it. 5/5

The only thing that threw me off with this peom was the use of beauty or beauties so much it kind of made the flow a little off balance. The topic again was great fantasy enjoyed that of it. Good style although I'm not quite the fan of them but if you can pull them off then well done. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work~Mel

"question believe?"
^^ Though, I completely understand what that is saying, I don't quite like how it's worded.

Other than that I quite like this poem.
We had this topic the other day in school. Haha.

I love mermaids. (:
Good question as well, darling.
Keep it up.

Beautiful.
acrostic poems are so very difficult because of how restricting they are.
this is brilliant what you have done
5.5
grats

Wow, this is one truly enchanting acrostic poem! I usually don't read poems about nature but this one really got my attention from the beginning to the end. You have beautiful atmosphere in the whole poem, and your descriptions are very good.
Captivating and original piece.
Keep writing, you have a way with words!

This was good but not your best I think you could have done alot to this but you gave a little better luck next time Plot121