I really liked it no i mean
i loved it
its cool
it was good i liked it :)

It good writing!! more story than poem but still quite enjoyable!! i was a bit lost at how a butterfly was so interested in some human lol but amazaing meaning after all!! great work :P

A Very interesting read =]
Great job, this poem is very good

This is so amazing. very bittersweet.....and yes, it is very much a story, but that doesn't matter. great job

This is a sad poem n it brought back memories of two years back where sumone special told me d same story... n d fren is lost not her story,... itr came back 2day in ur poem..

Thanks 4 rthis poem..

Keep writinhg

Best wishz,,,Karan

Thats really sweet and it almost made me cry lol! shame jks lol! =)

FABULOUS(5/5)
I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
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Junaid

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
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A very beautiful poem.
i loved the way you told a story in a poem form, it was lovely.
and a wonderful ending too.
i was touched.
nice job! 5/5.

While this was an excellent write and it had a positive flow, I found it to be a little cliche. Sometimes it's fun to recreate stories like that and make them your own, but I shy away from it myself. Good yob nonetheless

Awe this was a really cute story......it made me smile, than frown, than smile agian.....great job!

<3 Aly

I didn't really care much for the ending. Other than that the poem was very nice.

Beautiful...Simply beautiful ! 5/5

Im speechless this poem was amazing

This is different and very unique but so sad. I loved it, well written, 5/5. Em