Under A Pine Tree...

by isabel   Sep 30, 2007


Wrath took my sanity away
I know it was my last day
All that I knew was I was broken
So sadly and hopelessly broken

I let myself fall under a pine tree
That I know I couldn't see
And I let my blood run
The end has begun

When I forgot what you said
And I knew, deep inside, I was dead
I understood I had been sleeping
While my heart had been weeping

A nightmare, a sad story
And my dark mind isn't sorry
It was just a dream, just a thought
Only a nightmare...Or not?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I was thinking about the last lines... it seems there is part two coz of that question? but anyway... it was amazing coz u had write it perfectly and the creativity is great!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written mysterious dark poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh amazing, imagery is powerful in here, I really loved your wording also. A bit sad, and end just let the reader quessing if it was dream or not. Really enjoyed this!
    5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Pretty good. love it

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