Among all three poems that i've read from you , i must say i really enjoy and really love this one.. why? so inspirational, so powerful (full of emotions and courage that one day you'll surpass and withstand every life's challenges ) and the imagination is different from the usual sad poem that i've already read. hmm.. a real master of the heart!! really deserve 5!! keep it up!!

The emotion, flow, and everything was amazing. The rhyming though, well, I wasn't too fond of it. A lot of it was just. . . . kind of cheesy. If that makes sense, because it wasn't really cheesy. I know it's confusing, but the rhyming wasn't all that great, but the lines themself were amazing. (:

Have you ever tried freewriting? If so, let me know, I'd like to check them out.