Innocence

by Brenda Becerra   Sep 30, 2007


If I were you and you were me, would I feel young? would I feel free? Would I open my eyes on every new day, filled with excitement and wanting to play? Would a day take forever? a year feel like ten? When will it be Christmas? or my Birthday again? Could I play with your toys, with no worries or fears? If I were upset, would you wipe my tears? Would the world seem fresh, clean and new? Would I know where to go? know what to do? Would I go to school, eager to be taught? Could I be naughty and not get caught? Could I fight with my brother, then kiss and make up? Go for a drink and share the same cup? Could I run through the fields and play in the park? Would I sleep witht the light on, afraid of the dark? Would I know how you're feeling, if you were me? What would I think? What would I see? If you were me and I were you, how would YOU feel? what would YOU do?

my friend wrote this to me and i just found it and i dont know how to put it in favorites please comment on it anyway

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  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    I'm back & i realy enjoyed this poem. i give you 5/5

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    by mohamad aref numan

    Nice one

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    by kia

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    by poetic Justice

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    by Kris

    LOVE IT!!
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