Over Time

I absolutely love this poem. The concept was really moving... I know exactly how it feels. This poem really reached out to me, and thats impressive! 5/5

This is a really good poem but it also deserves a title. that is just my opinion sorry if it confuses you. you are a good poet and i look foward to reading the rest of your poems:~)Sam

Quite an effective poem, The emotions you portrayed were really vivid and deep. I liked How it was sad yet held hope within each line. The word choice very simple yet effective and it became such an enjoyable read. A heartfelt piece which captured my heart. keep up the great work. ~mel

Though the poem was written with simplicity I could steel feel the depths of the meaning.
I think the structure worked well, and flowed straight from you heart.

An amazing peice,
very thought provoking.

--Elly.

Solid structure and it flows really well. I'm normally a fan of reading rhyming poems, although this is a perfect example of why you don't always need a rhyme structure.

This is written straight from the heart, and the emotion contained in just 5 small stanza's is exceptional. Its a really touching piece that lays your heart right on the line.

Nice work.
[5/5]
~Pete.