"At this time last year,
I would've taken any chance
To go back in time
And fix everything I've done wrong."

These lines had the most effect on me. I've done some wrong to people myself and would do anything in the world to fix. Your message in this poem was completely on point and beautiful to perfection! 5/5

Solid structure and it flows really well. I'm normally a fan of reading rhyming poems, although this is a perfect example of why you don't always need a rhyme structure.

This is written straight from the heart, and the emotion contained in just 5 small stanza's is exceptional. Its a really touching piece that lays your heart right on the line.

Nice work.
[5/5]
~Pete.

Though the poem was written with simplicity I could steel feel the depths of the meaning.
I think the structure worked well, and flowed straight from you heart.

An amazing peice,
very thought provoking.

--Elly.

Quite an effective poem, The emotions you portrayed were really vivid and deep. I liked How it was sad yet held hope within each line. The word choice very simple yet effective and it became such an enjoyable read. A heartfelt piece which captured my heart. keep up the great work. ~mel

This is a really good poem but it also deserves a title. that is just my opinion sorry if it confuses you. you are a good poet and i look foward to reading the rest of your poems:~)Sam

I absolutely love this poem. The concept was really moving... I know exactly how it feels. This poem really reached out to me, and thats impressive! 5/5