WOWWWWWW man do i relate to this awesome piece We all take for granted
the things we already have. You are not
the first aleast you know that you are doing it and can finally do something about befor you lose it. cy

I can relate to this piece. Great poem, very deep with some meaningful thoughts behind it. I like the way you wrote it, you put a lot of emotions into it. The ending line is great, it rounds up whole poem and it is very effective like the ending of this piece.
All in all, greatly written.
5/5 from me