This is simple and short yet it was really a meanignful poem. a flawless poem and could easily picture out a lonesome and painful scene in reader's head. good job!!

Very simple and yet effective, conveying the intended message. Very precise and up to the point superb. Make the correction you're/your.

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Short but yet very meaningful and deep, simple to read but so you are connecting to readers better. A sad atmosphere all over this poem also and you have a powerful imagery. I really loved this piece.
5/5 Amazing write

"and now your gone" << you're.
capitalize your I's dear.
And, also.. I think that there should be a stanza break after the line I copied and pasted
It would give the reader time to comprehend.. the change.

Good poem, though.
Great emotion in such little words. (:
Amazing job.

Great effect. I like it a lot:)
although it's short it gets the point acrossed.

Great effect. I like it a lot:)
although it's short it gets the point acrossed.

It was so short poem but it means a lot!
great emotions though .....5/5

Short and sweet and sad all in one! lost... 1 of mii favorite words!