Well most probably i feel the same regrets and sadness that i'm trying to get rid but this poem somehow reminds me of what had happened so as the vivd emotions.. and to tell you you brought up a simple yet a great poem that some people could easily relate with. good job keep it up!

First off..awww...second I loved the metaphor of the puppy being skiddish to you and your relationship. The flow was ok but the story was great and sad. I can understand the feeling insecurity. Great job and keep it up.

I can totally relate this poem with what I am going through right now and it is poignant for me. I loved the way you have written the words and it flows well. Keep it up 5/5

Tc
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Very well written and i like the way it was a story and i thought it flowed well good job 5/5

Hmm i like this one! its simply expressed all the hidden feelings and i can truly feel the emotion. its sincerely and no doubts for saying all those very deep words..im impress so i give it 5/5

God bless!