Great Job...I felt like it was me talking and telling my story...let's just say it hit home!!!!

Omg.... i freaking love this!!! going in my favorites!! wow... i love it...if only every guy could write poetry like this! lol... keep it up! wonderful job!

Woops.. sorry!! wrote it on the wrong one.. lol.. but i really do like this one a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really.. you are super talented even for this being your first try.. i never would have guessed!! awesome work!! keep it up

This poem is really good!
Great job XD
I enjoyed reading it