by David Oct 1, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Blazing shards of metal |
I really like this poem of yours it is very good.. |
by Sarahh
Wow that was really well written i liked it |
Words fail me! |
by firexdancer
This really describes what really happens in a battle, it's not all glory and everything, it's sadness. even though this poem is really good, i think you could make it alot better if you made it longer, so that it would have more of an ending. 5/5 |
by rachael
This is terrific david, youve accurately captured battle throughout the ages, great descriptive style.again i like the title. it brings out the injustice. and it rhymes!go david. rachael says yes. ok not really. |