Battle Torn

by David   Oct 1, 2007


Blazing shards of metal
An epic battle between
Two warring clans
The ending was blurred and unseen

Countless soldiers dead
So many more wounded
Innocent unarmed citizens,
Women and children unluckily included

Archers and cavalry
Warriors and knights
Fighting for their pride and country
Strength reaching new heights

Flaming flying arrows
Blood stained swords
Conquering and defeats
Controlled by evil hands of the lords..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    I really like this poem of yours it is very good..

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarahh

    Wow that was really well written i liked it
    your a good writer!

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Words fail me!
    what a divine poem. (the last stanza is my favorite.) im a fan of the dark poem genre.
    5/5

    (P.s. your display picture is hilarious. it is the sort of thing i'd say. XD.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This really describes what really happens in a battle, it's not all glory and everything, it's sadness. even though this poem is really good, i think you could make it alot better if you made it longer, so that it would have more of an ending. 5/5
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by rachael

    This is terrific david, youve accurately captured battle throughout the ages, great descriptive style.again i like the title. it brings out the injustice. and it rhymes!go david. rachael says yes. ok not really.

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