Slow suicide...

by burning666   Oct 1, 2007


Smoking kills she says
as she lights one up,

Cutting is self mutilation she says
as her wrists start to weep,

Drinking damages your body she says
as she empties another bottle,

Water is the giver of life she says
as her glass remains empty,

Eating is needed to live she says
as she turns her meal away

Warmth is needed to survive she says...
"Well screw you i dont want to survive!"
she screams and stands naked in the blizzzard

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittiny

    Dont listan to zisto you can write what ever you want to right about it. if it sounds good to you then let everybody know dont let people tell you what to do. i thought the poem what really great keep up the good work and belive in your self no matter what people say

  • 17 years ago

    by I HATE YOU ALOT

    Wow that is really awesome. keep u p the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Zisto

    I like your work but I don't feel like it's so good. Try to improve. Read some guides and try to think twice, no, think twenty times before submiting a poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Interesting poem. Very original and i love it! Great job.

    fav part: Smoking kills she says
    as she lights one up,

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