I think this is going to end up as an exellent poem hun, i really liked reading it so far make sure you let me know when you have finished it and ill be sure to comment on it again :D xxx alex xxx

I thought it was great, and the wording
was absolutely amazing. this poem was
beautifully written and it flowed so well
5/5

nikki

Good poem. Wonderfully written and I liked your choice of words. You expressed yourself wonderfully. The rhyming was great and the flow was flawless.
Great Job 5/5

-Shannon <3

I can see the creativity in your poem. It flows so well and is written the best. The consecutive rhyming is perfect and its just 5/5 I can give you ;)

Tc
Fsams

This was such an enjoyable read. Really creative. I found it to be really interesting and the flow was almost trancing. Written with such simplicity though flowing so smoothly. The effect you created from this poem was calm. Liked the meaning portrayed. Overall a nice read. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

Ohhh how I love this piece.

I don't even know what I can say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about this piece...

This is just beautiful. Beautiful.
I found it to be interesting and original and it made me smile throughout.

Imagery was beautifully done, and the flow was FLAWLESS throughout the whole piece.

Just...perfect.