THIS A VER SWEET POEM.....NICE JOB!!!!

Your words! thier so sweet! and like whoa! lol gahh! your amazing!

Very great and descriptive poem!
Although I did not like how you started the poem, and stanzas with the word "And".
for some reason that bugged me.

also,
"She saw an image
That can't be unbind."
that is not correct use of grammar
if it was to be said like that it would be
"She saw an image
That can't be unbound"

but since that does not rhyme with the poem,
you would have to change it to
"She saw an image
That cannot unbind."

just how i see it.

5/5 amazing!

As I look into the skies,
I see an angel in disguise,-buetiful