This is a pretty good poem. first off you need to put some spaces in there so its easier to read. plus it makes it look better. um i can feel the emotion there is alot of it and i can def. feel it in there. um keep up ur writing. its pretty good.

You are right. you know when you write it's easy for you to read, but definately you are right, it is hard sometimes. I will take a look and make some changes.

This is a really good poem...
a lot of emotion and so much sadness...
loved it =)
keep going
*isabel*

I do really like this poem for it makes u feel real emotion. Keep on Cuttie

Keep on doing what your doing..i liked the poem

I really like this
i can feel the emotion in it!
nice work hunni
keep it up
xoxo

I LOVE THIS POEM BUT IT MAKES ME FEEL SAD CUZ THIS IS HAPPENIN TO ME RIGHT NOW