by dollwithafrown Oct 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A trickle of tear glosses my skin; |
by Teria
It was an amazing poem, darling. I felt it could have been longer, because . . . it was missing something? |
by ECILA ice
Yeah a sad poem but full of hopes and courage that one day you'll regain and win back what was once gone.. i like the set up and how you end the last stanza. although it's not so powerful, you still manage to make it a flawless poem.. good work!! |