Perfectly Perfect!.!.!

by Vane   Oct 1, 2007


I lay on my bed
And think about you and me
And how perfect this turned out to be
How life works in mysterious ways
To bring people together
That never thought would end up as one

I remember the day that I met you
I was total mess
Had my hair totally the wrong way
My clothes was just not right
But even so
You saw beyond my soul and into my heart

When I saw you I stopped breathing
You instantly took my breath away
And left me with nothing to say

We started talking
And finally you asked me out
That day I couldn't stop smiling
Even though I probably looked like a retard
With that smile on my face
But it was the perfect day

To me you seem so perfect
That I'm afraid it's all an illusion
Everything you say
Everything you do
How my hand fits perfectly in yours
How I feel so safe when you hold me tight
And I wish you never let me go
And when u kiss me I feel like heaven is home

I never asked for someone like you
Because I didn't believe it was true
But life proved me mistaken
And I'm so happy that life was right
And I was wrong.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany M

    I love this poem...it really relates to really life...5/5

    ps-thanks for rating my poem...maybe sometime u will get time to read some of the others i have written :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    "..I remember the day that I met you
    I was total mess
    Had my hair totally the wrong way
    My clothes was just not right
    But even so
    You saw beyond my soul and into my heart.."

    i loved this piece of yours.. im sure alot of ppl will relate to this.. Great work..
    a really passionate yet at turns, heartbreaking write

    "..To me you seem so perfect..
    ..That I'm afraid it's all an illusion.."

    superbly penned piece this.
    Keep up the good work

    ~Wake~