by Teria Oct 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
With colored lights of gold rushing past my heart, |
Oh my where have YOU been hiding?! I have been reading this for hours I was once very active (They took away 2 of my awards!)just got back on. THIS is one of the BEST ones I've read on here so far. You have TALENT. The flow is great The POWER the Passion The PAIN..WHATEVER you do KEEP writing!!! |
I completely fell for the words you used here, such a delicate and sad experience, yet so beautifully penned.Keep writing..5/5 |
by ABake
I really enjoyed this peice. The emotion was not overbearing but I still felt it. Which is great. |
I like the nightmare within a nightmare part, curioous. |
by ECILA ice
Another peacful and graceful ambiance in the poem.. but though u still manage to bring up the sad emotion in this one. your wordings kept the simplicity of with intense potray or scenario.. keep up the good work |