This was another sweetly written piece. Quite deep though holding a touch of sadness which you portrayed into this poem with depth. I loved your word choice yet again so deep and strong which gave the reader the emotions which you were feeling when writing this poem. I loved this alot and it's pieces like this that is why your on my favorites list. Well done hun. Keep it up. ~Mel

You've done it again.
I have to say that I'm envious of your... errr... skills. Lol. I couldn't think of what I wanted to say.

The poem was marvelous, no doubt in my mind. The flow, the word usage, the emotions... everything was perfect. Beautiful job. :P Overall: 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Another peacful and graceful ambiance in the poem.. but though u still manage to bring up the sad emotion in this one. your wordings kept the simplicity of with intense potray or scenario.. keep up the good work

I like the nightmare within a nightmare part, curioous.

your servant:
atticus

I really enjoyed this peice. The emotion was not overbearing but I still felt it. Which is great.

I always like non rhyming poems. Lol. If that makes sense. I think that it adds extra emotion into a peice. As it does for this particular peice.
Great job =))
5/5

Amber...

I completely fell for the words you used here, such a delicate and sad experience, yet so beautifully penned.Keep writing..5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Oh my where have YOU been hiding?! I have been reading this for hours I was once very active (They took away 2 of my awards!)just got back on. THIS is one of the BEST ones I've read on here so far. You have TALENT. The flow is great The POWER the Passion The PAIN..WHATEVER you do KEEP writing!!!