by Michael D Nalley Oct 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Out of Egypt, and into the desert where only the love of freedom sustains. |
by Gasttlee
That was so impressive. I could picture everything you're saying. 5/5 |
I liked how the ended reflected back to one of the previous stanzas. It brought the whole poem together, IMO. I really have nothing to criticize about this. The flow and wording was absolutely wonderful. And clear images were easily floating into my mind as I read. |