Now I really like this poem, I love how it rythmes it makes it so good, I like the fact that you have maade the message clear and made a conclusion at the end, that you have gotten over this person and that person cant have ur heart again. |
by ALEX
Sounds like a "I just needed to write this" poem. It's really great. The emotion is there, but I think you're masking it a little. 5/5 |
by halie
O my gosh |