Comments : I wish I knew

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary

    Hey
    this is a really cute poem. this part:

    I wish i never had to see you cry
    Because then you'd never have to ask why

    i think u messed up there cuz it doesnt make sense. I think u meant i wish u never had to see me cry.

    Anyways it was a really a great poem. keep it up!!! :]