Forever fading are the memories we shared,
Forgotten like the feeling when I once knew you cared.
I've fallen to the bottom of your list of to-do's,
And somehow I know this game of love, I'm about to lose.

That stanza really touched me. I don't know why.. It just did. You had a really good rhyme scheme here and a very good story. I liked it very much, I will say. I can't really pick anything out that I don't enjoy.. You did a really nice job on this one.

5/5

Oohh how i loved this...the depth and emotion in this piece was overwhelming, the opening was powerful with each line thereafter just getting and better while the ending was so heart breaking and yet wrapped the piece up so perfectly. beautifully and elegantly written.

Excellently Penned.

This peice was emotional and was very well known, in the sense that many people feel this way in the 'Game' of love.
I thought you wrote it well, and the read was well past enjoyable.

5/5 keep it up,
Elly.

Excellent!

It was short but filled with ideas, The emotions and the words used are well expressed.

"I'm anything but everything to you"
I like this line, very promising words!

Keep it up!

Short but well done. The rhyming is simple but it worked. Wonderfully portrayed emotions.

I'm anything but everything to you,
Promises mean nothing when they all fall through.

i loved those 2 lines, it was amazing, this piece was so captivating. it was short but had alot of ideas. great work 5/5

nikki

That a nice poem Tammie- be happy about it- it fantastic and understandable- i like your experssion- 'promises mean nothing when they asll fall through'

This is excellent, this piece really flows well and the rhythm is brilliant. I love the imagery you use as well.
DnB

I thought it was another cliche love poem but i become so judge mental because i found out that this poem is another unique and heart warming piece that you have written.. a simple yet a direct poem, it really touched and melt my heart. nice smooth ending.. it flowed so well. keep it up!

Great one!!!