Medusa Kiss

This was not bad the images were good but abit off, the story too left abit to the imagination. I enjoyed it but I thought it too short to get the whole story of the titan out Plot121

Wow... this poem is so unique, truly excellently written. I like atmosphere that you created, it is so mystical, and the mythological contend adds great effect to this piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-Jealousy reared its ugly head, while
Irony gave you a new face inferior
Serpents covering eyes of dark dead
The Mighty Zeus showed you a mirror
A lonely existence of fear and dread-

Keep up!

"Medusa kiss" great title, though simply written but well describe.... A brilliant descriptive piece of dark poems you portray here.... Well rhyme yet so creative... Beautiful done!

Very nice. The broken pattern and rhyme scheme helped convey the curiosity and apprehension that one must feel when searching out that Medusa kiss.

Really well done Timothy. I like the rhymes and near rhymes, and that you didn't stick to a rigid line/rhyme pattern. And any allusions to Mythology are alright in my book!