Really nice i cud tell u put a lot of effort and i have to say good work i reallly liked it cuz it came from ur heart.... 5/5

Lovee it.
5/5

Wow that was really good. It seems like you put alot of work into it and i loved your metaphors you used in their "caged dove" omg listen to me i sound like my Lang Aurts teacher lol well it was great ! Have a great day !

This is a really good poem. your style is so original and it fits your diction perfectly to create a very beautifully written poem. keep it up Shanik