This is a deep poem....sometimes its hard to have deep feelings for soemone who doesnt have them as deep back for you....but as you said its better off to have someone just as friends rather then lose them all together ..
gr8 write
keep it up
bree

Another good one! now we all know why poets go through bad things, to get these great poems... any who... i know what you mean having some one just be friends so that you don't lookse them all together, i guess that if you go out with some one then that person is your life and knows you so well that not having that person that knows so well lets you feel left with no one. that why a break up hurts so bad.

Another great poem kat... its a perfect one...

"Now I stumble in circles
Unsure of where to go
Our paths, they once crossed
Only to be led apart
How can I sit here and let it melt away"

Sometimes being someones friend is all that we can be and although it may hurt, friendship can grow deeper over time and it's worth waiting for
5/5
*Gem*

WOW! really really liked it it was deep and u did a real good job!!!well ckeck mine out sumtime and comment for me!!!!!

Keep Wrting......
*Cici*