Wow, I really like this. It's heavy but strong and abstract. Perhaps not perfect but it's good enough for me. Very strong ending, definitely a good poem. 5/5

Wow... this is so powerful, I'm honestly amazed. Every stanza is truly effective.
I admire uniqueness of this piece, and the creativity that you put in it. You expressed emotion through the poem excellently.
5/5 from me

You have a lot of talent here. Your message and flow was flawless and on point. 5/5

I cannot help but to wonder if there is more than what you have placed in black and white. I feel as though there is something written in between the lines as well.

Still, this piece is moving and allows great streangth to show. I love how you keep your stanza's at a regular flow. Not allowing for any interuptions.

The title in itself it fitting; yet, it does not lead the reader to correctly assume what the poem is about. That is a good thing.

~~Sher

Great poem, i really liked it.