This is so deep poem, it has outstanding atmosphere. You mixed excellent imagery with greatly described emotions, topic is also excellent, very meaningful. I like your word choice, it is absolutely great. Well done!

Wow... Another one superb dark piece from you. You truly have a way with words, and a lot of talent.
I like the whole idea for this poem, it is very original and refreshing. I never read something like this.
The imagery is fantastic and vivid in every part of the poem.
Whole message of this piece is great.
Keep up!