This poem totally impress me, it looks like you put your self in it and I appreciate that. When I read it first time only thing that I could say was WOW!!! Truly breathtaking piece, it is filed with so many emotions, it is also so honest and personal, really deep. I like everything about it, you expressed your self and you feelings incredibly. I am glad that my title is inspire you to write this amazing poem. You should be proud on it!

Nicely done it took me somewhere though ive tried to forget, but thats the reason for story telling. good work

I'm honestly impressed! This piece has greatly created, dark atmosphere along with excellent, unique descriptions. Very effective poem.
This stanza is my favorite one:

-I silently dwell on the other side,
quoting prayers of a perpetual liar.
Suffocating from unspoken verity,
slowly drowning in a sea of fire.-
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It is deep and it has fantastic imagery.
I like the ending a lot, too. It rounds up whole poem greatly and it is very effective.
Keep up!

Wow i like this poem alot
it has lots of compasion of your bleeding soul that can't be herd by the comforming world that is suposidly the artificial heaven that more people hate then love
5/5

Ahh holy shit this is good