"..Falling down, one too many,
like the cold tearing drops of sky,
invisible pearls wind leading the way,
each with a jingle in itself,
with no reason to cry.."

Marvelous.. simply Amazing.. what a beautiful write.. so finely captured.. great work man.. great work , indeed
Keep it up

~Wake~

Awesome poem <3

Wow...
This piece is breathtaking, it holds so much beauty and sadness within. I like your descriptions and choice of words from the beginning to the end. Whole poem is truly captivating.
Keep up!
5/5 from me