by Illusion Oct 2, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
I don't know the reason why |
by Marisel
I liked it but it was hard to tell wat u wanted things to ryhme with wat... u gta keep things goin in one steady motion... b ut other then that it was good. |
Wow...great poem :) go on |
by NearlyCrazy6
I like that. |
by Kaila
Very good the only thing I'd really harp on is to get your stanzas equalled out but it was still a very good poem nice work |
Brill |