by Nikko McMorbid Oct 2, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Note: This is a curse. No, maybe just a chant, a simple spell to protect my one true love. I won't let anyone hurt her. Even if it means making a sin, I will willingly do it. I love her. Please forgive me. |
I love this line "Let this curse in my eyes be the light." |
by Miu
Brilliant! So much mixed emotion, made it fun to read and kept me interested even though I don't like long poems too much, It just was super. Even though it didn't ryhme it flowed perfecto! Amazing really. Imagery and wording were amazing. |