Fear

I love this poem , the only one to have expressed all I've been feeling for the past few months

Addict is two ds, but that's okay, you have shown your powerful command of language, again, and again
ever try non-rhyming poems?

I loved it. The emotion was shown.
Your a talented writer.

"I'm slowly sinking in the quicksand
Drowning fast in the bath
Burning up in consent fire
Not having you anymore, is nothing I want."

My favourite stanza.
Keep writing, 5/5

"My breathing slows, I almost can't hear
Blurry eyes, trying to see past the tears
Heart stopping, my face showing my fears
Life lost at this last year."

I liked how you ended ur poem... it's really depressing and touching at the same time... your story is quite sad like mine... the way you've written it really struck me.. anywayz.. great poem! =]

I don't like rhyming too much, it seems forced and I think that this poem could be even better if you didn't rhyme in any stanza.
Other than that excellently done, second stanza is my favorite one and whole poem is written with a lot passion and greatly described sadness and strong emotions. You did good job, bravo!