by LoveBird99 Oct 2, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Earlier on, we were the best of friends |
by meli
This is a great poem n every beautiful..good job.=] i hope ur friend is okay..=] |
by she
Ooh,very sad,but sounds like you really care for your friend,hope things get better. 5/5 |
Awww, this was so sadd. I thought you portrayed your feeling about wanting you friend back very well, though. I'm an ex-cutter myself, I know how it destrys people. Great job! |
by Kaila
Brilliant job with this poem... it brought tears to my eyes.. the way you described it made me see it so vividly... keep it up.. i love your writings.. (maybe there is something in this girls life that is making her cut herself other than her new friends...) 5/5! |
by Polaroid
Wow this was really great, keep it up, |