I love this poem. It's amazing. It describes me and my old friend Danielle. She cuts too all because she thinks her life is awful with her new "friends". Anyway.. keep this up, this is really good.. =)

-Taylor

I love this poem its vary good my best friend cuts

Wow this was really great, keep it up,
i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
Polaroid
p.s GREAT JOB

Brilliant job with this poem... it brought tears to my eyes.. the way you described it made me see it so vividly... keep it up.. i love your writings.. (maybe there is something in this girls life that is making her cut herself other than her new friends...) 5/5!

Awww, this was so sadd. I thought you portrayed your feeling about wanting you friend back very well, though. I'm an ex-cutter myself, I know how it destrys people. Great job!

Cayce xx

Ooh,very sad,but sounds like you really care for your friend,hope things get better. 5/5

This is a great poem n every beautiful..good job.=] i hope ur friend is okay..=]