I can hurt you too

Aww, I thought it was going to be a dark poem about really hurting someone *pouts* I'm in need of some really dark poetry. Anyways, I thought it was pretty good. Maybe you should make it long and go into more details about how you actually hurt him. I think the last stanza was the best, it was more heart-felt. Good job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Love it....

the whole concept was amazing... its a "in your face take that" kind of poem lol.

you did a good job.the flow was good and the rhyming was too..i didnt have to pause at all.

good job.5/5

Oh the bitter and angst and revenge! i love it! its so harsh but so perfect!!!

WOW.. that really hit home for me right now, that was really good and i loved the emotion behind every word very well written

keep writing... 5/5

What I found to stand out was one line in particular: "but I evened it out a little/to make myself feel better" It kinda had a humour feeling to the poem, kind of uplifted it for a moment and left me wondering what exactly had been done to even things out a little. But that is something you did not finish like a though unsaid. The rest of the poem concludes with a vague imply of what was done and I hope you might rewrite this one day to give us that hint of revenge and the true hurt that caused it to happen.