Good poem, sad, Very Well written!

Wow. simply amzing like always love <333
i got new ones up. comment some?

Hey good poem or u can say super good...sounds wrong lol
i <3 it =]

I like the idea behind it, and the overall theme I suppose would be a good word. There were points in it where the words seemed forced and the flow broke a bit but all in all very good. 5/5

Short and sweet poem with the intended content and meaning. You could write a comma here "if it was, we'd be together". This one is great 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Great poem.Alot of emotion.I love how you ended it.It's great to see a poem about hurting the person back instead of just everyone saying,oh he/she hurt me so much,what can I do? unno?
Anyway great piece of poetry.
Keep writing,
Miranda

Damn i love the message.. this is my absolute fave part:

I guess you never thought
I could hurt you too

dang.. really like the thought of this piece.. something people dont write about much.. usually it would be about being the victim.. but this is just great.. like it so much.. *bow down*

~angel~

I liked this, I can relate. It's poetic but with little subtleties of revenge entwined within it. nice write.

Wow this is really good please check my stuff out and tell me wat you think

Im sry! this poem was very sad! it touched my heart! great work!

What I found to stand out was one line in particular: "but I evened it out a little/to make myself feel better" It kinda had a humour feeling to the poem, kind of uplifted it for a moment and left me wondering what exactly had been done to even things out a little. But that is something you did not finish like a though unsaid. The rest of the poem concludes with a vague imply of what was done and I hope you might rewrite this one day to give us that hint of revenge and the true hurt that caused it to happen.

WOW.. that really hit home for me right now, that was really good and i loved the emotion behind every word very well written

keep writing... 5/5

Oh the bitter and angst and revenge! i love it! its so harsh but so perfect!!!

Love it....

the whole concept was amazing... its a "in your face take that" kind of poem lol.

you did a good job.the flow was good and the rhyming was too..i didnt have to pause at all.

good job.5/5

Aww, I thought it was going to be a dark poem about really hurting someone *pouts* I'm in need of some really dark poetry. Anyways, I thought it was pretty good. Maybe you should make it long and go into more details about how you actually hurt him. I think the last stanza was the best, it was more heart-felt. Good job!

Keep writing!
Cayce