Comments : My Promise

  • 17 years ago

    by mahfoudh

    Ur poem is very nice so kp it up.
    You made it!
    I always knew you would.
    There's a star in the making.
    Look out world!
    Whether on a mountain top
    or in a valley low, you'll always
    make it through the storm
    and find a rainbow.

  • 17 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I really enjoy reading your poetry...once again the poem is well written and just beautiful to read 5/5