It is just like mine! I liked it, it has everything mine brought up and more :)

5/5 that was really good..you really spoke the truth. all of those things are so true...great stuff=]

I couldn't agree more nice way of putting everything some of your stanzas really stuck out and I enjoyed them quite a bit. one of my favorite lines was:
Many people are depressed
And yet they go unnoticed
As that bullet goes through their head
Why does it have to come to this?
I loved that nice work
5/5