Wow. I really liked this peice. I don't even know what to say. But wow. The emotion in this peice was overwhelming. I loved the line "But Baby, call me a cynic because jealousy is my middle name" The whole peice was amazing. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

WOW! i hate it when people sleep around on each other (though I'm not one for sex before marriage anyways). But setting aside my personal feelings, the poem itself is brilliant. You tell a story all too well. I'm enjoying your free verse so much. keep it up!
Charisma*