This is a very good poem and it tells a sad story that alot of ppl go through.

5/5

Great poem 5/5 keep it up !

I liked this...emotional and heartfelt, with a real meaning behind the words.
Flow, imagery and wording were all nicely done. Beautifully and elegantly written.

This is a great poem....I really liked it....keep writing!!!

Wow.(and yes, i like to use wow too) that was a very good poem. great word choice and flow

Hmm.. nice.. really nice.. i lik it=).. it semms tho, that this poem waz almost meant to be in a mor free verse.. nonetheless u made it happen.. great job i admire that 5/5

Very meaninggful yet sad. I like the choice of words you uses. Very well done, kel.