From the bigining to the end i truely do... (not one of my best)

by sara   Oct 3, 2007


This is one of my oldest poems I just found it yesterday I wrote it about 3 years ago

I didn't know why i felt,
i wanna say it.
and i did..i don't regret..

i said it once
and twice

i love you
and i truly do

I suffered before i said
and am suffering after i did

but i don't regret
my love is true

you are my friend
and I'm as a friend to u

thats why my love to u ,is truly true

By my side stand
i don't wanna lose you

from the beginning to the end
you are my best friend

but i wont forget
when i said it once and it was true

i love you .................i truly doo

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    This is a really good poem i can tell tht you really did like this person
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    AN amazinG writeR... iT iS yoU thE besT writinG ... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Sara,
    I have given you 5/5 but I do have some advice:
    - capitalize you "" i"
    - break it like this:
    thats why my love to you
    is truly true

    I love you
    I truly do

    Other than that a very sweet and beautiful poem by you.

    Take care, sweetie

    Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by stuart s

    This is a really good poem i liked it :) the flow was very good :), amazing