Innocent Suicide

by Jess   Oct 3, 2007


This is about how i was

She covers up her arm to hide the scar
She remembers someone saying
No-one cares who you are
She brought a ticket and came to the dance
She gave socialising one last chance
She sat in the back from everyone she fled
She cut up her arms and cried as she bled
People kept away as she bled on the floor
Tears ran down her face as she bled some more
"What is she doing?"
"How long has she cried?"
They asked as they watched
This innocent suicide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    That was fab, i like that it rymes so good and well. it has a warmth a thought were you fink about it and c it is hard to understand someones feeling good poem. xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, really good poem..its sad but very heartfelt and well written! I hope everything goes better for you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Woah this is intense in a scary sort of way, great poem but I hope you have found your way out of your darkened times. Im an athiest but I believe that praying to god or someone who is up there and it always helps and comforts me. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Estefania

    Wow! nice poem 5/5

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